An Ebarrassing Experience
I remembered that one day in my junior high school, an embarrassing thing happend. I wode a bike to school, then entered my classroom. At the moment I wanted to take a book from my school bag. I found something strange. I couldn't find my school bag... The reson was I didn't bring my school bag when I left home. What I could do was to call my father to bring it to me. All of my classmates knowed it then laughed at me. It's an embarrassing experience to me.From then on, when I told my friends about this, they also laughed at me. I would never forget to bring school bag to school.
posted by [[ 我是_思,,* ]] @ 7:27 上午
4 Comments:
wode a bike的rode拼錯了
還有...reason少拼了一個a
"All of my classmates knowed ..."
know三態屬於不規則變化
know-knew-known
"From then on, when I told my friends about this, they also laughed at me."
這句中的also替換成always 或許比較順暢點
What I could do was to call my father to bring it to me.為什麼be動詞可以和動詞放在一起？
wode 改成ride 其他的還ok
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