My Bedroom
The decoration of my room is simple. As you enter the room, you can see the bookcase is next to the door on the right, it filled with books. The place where I study is my desk, the desk and the chair is in the right corner, next to the bookcase. The window is on the wall next to the bed, every morning the sunshine will illuminate through the window in my room. The closet is in the left corner, beside the bed. The bed is next to the desk, too. It's convenient that after I study and tired I can take a rest. There is a saying can describe My room " Small as the sperrow is, it prossesses all its internal organs."
posted by [[ 我是_思,,* ]] @ 5:31 上午
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My desk and the chair is in the right corner,→My desk and the "are" in the....
Small as the "sperrow" is
→是sparrow
you can see the bookcase is next to the door on the right, it filled with books.後面那一句是要用被動嗎？
the desk and the chair is in the right corner, 是are啦
很ok的！
整篇文章很ok 只是有幾個錯字而已
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