Pollution
There are many kinds of pollution in the world. What's pollution? Pollution is contamination, a substance or thing that pollutes our enviroment. Pollution can make living things ill and let them die. So pollution is bad. You can see some kinds of pollution such as garbages and wasted bottles, but some pollutions are invisible , for exmple , nosie and dirty air.The most important thing we have to do is avoiding these pollutions. We can do our best, such as go to work on foot, by bike or by subway instead for cars and buses. If we can reduce the pollution, our enviroment will be beautified.
posted by [[ 我是_思,,* ]] @ 5:40 上午
3 Comments:
enviroment→environment
You can see some kinds of pollution such as garbages ...→garbage不加s
for exmple→for example
"nosie" and dirty air.→noise
其實搭ｂｕｓ也是可以的啦～
大眾運輸工具咩～
用走的會死人啦！
（這根英文沒啥關係＝ˇ＝）
都是靜婷啦ˋˊ
enviroment寫錯啦 environment
The most important thing we have to do is avoiding these pollutions.
改成The most important thing what we should do is avoid these pollutions.
beautified. 改成beautiful
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