Tips for staying healthy-Draft One
In order to stay healthy, there are some tips. First, the most important thing is eating food which is good for you, such as vegetables and also can not forger the fruit. The next, try to form a habit do exercise every day regularly, it makes your body strong. Third, get enough sleep comfortably, it makes you invigorate. In conclusion, keep a sense of exhilaration every day, it’s also very important! Staying healthy is a goal that everyone wants to accomplish.
posted by [[ 我是_思,,* ]] @ 8:30 上午
6 Comments:
很順啊～沒有什麼問題吧？！
寫的很棒 !!
"...such as vegetables and also can not forger the fruit."
那個forger是指forget嗎??
寫的不錯呀~
forger the fruit→forget
養成習慣你也可以用
get into the habit of V-ing
應該降寫ㄅ→it makes you invigorated)).
keep a sense of exhilaration every day, it’s also very important!
=it's also very important to keep a sense of....
其它都OK的啦~!!!!
such as vegetables and also can not forger the fruit. →我覺得改such as vegetables. Besides, we also can’t forget fruits.
Third, get enough sleep comfortably這句怪怪的
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