Union is strength---Draft One
Yesterday afternoon, there are many children played under the tree. Beside the tree was a water jar. One of the children found that there were many apples in the tree. So, he decided to climb up the tree in order to get the apples. When the child climbed up the tree, he dropped down and into the water jar abruptly. All of other children flocked around the water jar. They were horror-stricken. First, they bushed in the beginning, and then they assembled their power to find a way to save the child dropping into the water jar. Two of them went to carry a big stone. They thought that broke the water jar, the water in the water jar would flow out. After the water jar was broken, the water discharged and the child escaped. The child cried that he nearly died of fright at drop down the tree, and drowned into the water. All of them cheered about their cohesiveness.

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