星期一, 4月 16, 2007

Autobiography(1)---Draft One

I am Szu-ping Huang, a sixteen-year-old active girl born in Chung-Hua. But I grew up in Tainan. There are five people in my family. My father is a worker, my mother is an accountant, my elder brother is a college student, my younger brother is a junior high school student, and now I studying in Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I love the warm and fragrant feeling of my family. I must say I am lucky enough to grow in such a great home.

I like to play basketball, volleyball, and computer games. I am good at sport. Now I am a member of the volleyball team, I am a manager. Our team is united and earnest. I love all of member in the team. I am also proud of them. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like listening songs and reading. The former helps me relieve my pressure and the latter makes me become more artistic.

4 Comments:

At 8:47 上午, Blogger 平井" said...

寫的不錯耶~~^__^

 
At 1:20 上午, Blogger :V,瀞 ”婷* said...

I love all of member in the team.
→members

helps me relieve my pressure and the latter makes me become more artistic.
→helps me to relieve my pressure and the latter makes me ...

 
At 4:16 上午, Blogger 汶汶汶 said...

a sixteen-year-old active girl born in Chung-Hua
→active girl "who was " born in

listening songs and reading.
→listening"to" songs

 
At 12:55 上午, Blogger GIGI said...

寫的不錯~~

 

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