Autobiography(2)---Draft One
When I studied in the junior high school, my grades were not so good, especially in Math. But I was good at English; also I liked the subject the most. I used to be the small teacher of geography. I joined the choir in the junior, it made me learn some skills of singing.After the Joint Entrance Examination of Senior High Schools I enter the Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School and major in the Department of Applied Foreign Language. I am so glad that I chose it and found my favorite, also because that I don’t really like Math... Each school day to me is full of joy and fun. Our class is very great! Under the teachers’ instruction, I equip myself with Chinese and English typing skills. I pass both the English and Chinese Typing Test. Besides studying, I do enjoy my extracurricular activities. For example, I made some good friends in the choir and Volleyball Club, and learned what teamwork is all about. In my leisure time, I like to play computer games and reading, the two things all makes me feel relax.
In the near future, I hope I can make great progress in my schoolwork, strengthen my Math ability, and promote my EQ to improve my interpersonal relationship. In addition, I hope I can do well in the Joint Entrance Examination for Technology University which is coming the next year.
posted by [[ 我是_思,,* ]] @ 9:07 下午
3 Comments:
I was good at English; also I liked the subject the most.這裡為什麼要用分號？
I used to be the small teacher of geography.這句是什麼意思？我過去習慣做地理小老師嗎？
I like to play computer games and reading, the two things all makes me feel relax.
and前後動詞要一致
the two things all make me feel relax.make不用加s
你寫的好棒哦～不愧是我家阿竿ＸＤＤ
1.I joined the choir in the junior, it made me learn some skills of singing.
-->,換成;
2.After the Joint Entrance Examination of Senior High Schools I enter the Tainan Commercial Vocational [High Senior] School and major in the Department of Applied Foreign Language.
-->I前面加個[，] 還有Senior High的順序錯了喔
寫的不錯耶~~
嗯嗯~~還不錯~~
我來過了...
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