A Frightened Experience---Draft 1
Last year, my family went Ping-Tong to visit our relations. According to the weathercast there came a typhoon, so the weather was really bad. My father drove very fast in the heavy rain. It was quite dangerous. Then, the terrible thing happened. When my father drove through the bridge where so many cars were. Even though, he still drove in high speed. Suddenly, we closed with a car in front of us and my father couldn’t slow down in time. Our car bumped into the car in front then pulled over. At the moment I was really frightened. My head hit on the windshield in the accident. The windshield was almost broken and my head was swollen. Luckily, no others got hurt. The reason why I hit on it was that I didn’t wear the seat belt. Because I thought that we would arrive soon. At last, the police came and dealt with the accident. After this frightened experience, I would never forget to wear the seat belt.
posted by ：V，瀞 ”婷* @ 6:30 上午
2 Comments:
my family went Ping-Tong WENT的後面不用加TO 嗎？
he still drove in high speed高速的前面不用加定冠詞什麼之類的嗎？
寫的很好啊！你的意見跟我給ＧＩＧＩ的一樣～我的肉眼無法辨識
"According to the weathercast there came a typhoon,"
後面改成there was a typhoon coming比較順
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