A Dream I Had
I used to have a dream. The dream was about that… One day, when I walked into a forest, seeing a colorful deer. It seemed to talk with a tree, suddenly the tree changed into a door, the deer walked into the door. I ran hard and tried to catch up to it. Then, we entered a blockhouse where were so many drafts. They were busy packing a good deal of gifts. Actually, they worked for the Santa Claus. His sled pulled by the deer which I followed. The deer guided me to visit the blockhouse, after that the Santa Claus invited me to sending the gifts for children with him. I answered cheerfully with out any demurral. We put the gifts in to the gunny then took the sled to many places, the gifts were sent out soon. Unexpectedly, I found that there still was a gift with my name in the gunny. I picked up the gift which was assigned to me. When I was opening the gift, I heard a sound. Afterward I woke up and found that the sound was come from my alarm clock. Actually it was a dream, but it was a wonderful dream for me.
posted by [[ 我是_思,,* ]] @ 9:28 上午
4 Comments:
寫那麼多…你不知道我很忙嗎ˋ～ˊ
We put the gifts in to 是要打into嗎？
應該沒什麼錯吧…我累了…一直看跳行…留點給大家寫＝ˇ＝
你忘記加draft 1的標題了
小矮人或小精靈的單字拼錯了,我想妳應該是要拼dwarfs或elves吧??
"after that the Santa Claus invited me to sending the gifts for..." send改作原形
"I found that there still was a..."
still和was換一下位置~~
1)
to catch up it.
2)
draft??
什麼?
3)
invited me to send..
4)
When opening the gift,I ...
* after that the Santa Claus invited me to sending the gifts for -> sending要原形。
* I found that there still was a gift with my name in the gunny -> 應該是I found that there was still .....
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