Making Decisions---Draft One
Growing up means making my own decisions. I am no more a kid, and I am going to be eighteen years old. So, I think that I am able to make decisions by myself. I have been demands to follow my parents' decisions when I was a child. Even I couldn't complain about anything. But now is already different. I am growing up and independent enough to answer for my own decisions.
The hardest decision that I ever made was that two years ago I chose to enter the National Tainan Commercial Vacational Senior High School. When I was in senior high school, I took the base exam of entering senior high school. The grades was not bad in my opinion;However, as far as my parents were concerned it was not good enough and up to scratch. Despite they were disapproving, I was determined not to retake the second exam.I thought that I could make my own decisions without regret as I was not a child.
The hardest decision that I ever made was that two years ago I chose to enter the National Tainan Commercial Vacational Senior High School. When I was in senior high school, I took the base exam of entering senior high school. The grades was not bad in my opinion;However, as far as my parents were concerned it was not good enough and up to scratch. Despite they were disapproving, I was determined not to retake the second exam.I thought that I could make my own decisions without regret as I was not a child.
posted by [[ 我是_思,,* ]] @ 8:31 上午
4 Comments:
have been demand"ed"不是被要求嗎？
恩恩～沒有我肉眼看的出來的大問題
寫的很好啊
I have been (demanded) ..
as far as...concerned，
the phrase is gool，
"the base exam" is wrong.
is Basic Competence Test (BCT)
嗯~
應該沒啥大問題了
When I was in senior high school, I took the base exam of entering senior high school.
-->第一個應該是junior high吧!
The grades [was] not bad in my opinion;[However], as far as my parents were concerned it was not good enough and up to scratch.
-->were，however要小寫喔!
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