Computer---Draft Two
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They can be applied to all trades and professions. For instance, the engineers use them to do computer programming. Besides, we can also make use of them in our daily life, such as sending email instead of a traditional way writing letters. Computers enable us to have a convenient life.Personally, I have a liking for computers. By using the computer I can not only search for information which I need, but also can play the computer games. Chat with my friends in order to relax amid the stress of school work as well. However, my mom set the password in order to avoid my brother and me playing the computer deucedly, we just can use it on the weekend. Although the time which I can use it is less and short, I still like to play the computer.
posted by [[ 我是_思,,* ]] @ 8:28 下午
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Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They can be applied to all trades and professions. For instance, the engineers use them to do computer programming. Besides, people can also make use of them in their daily life, such as sending email instead of a traditional way of writing letters. Computers enable people to have a convenient life.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. By using the computer I can not only search for information which I need, but also can play the computer games, and chat with my friends in order to relax amid the stress of school work as well. Although the time which I can use it is less and short, I still like to play the computer.
* 第一段使用人稱應為第三人稱，所以要一致。
* However, my mom set the password in order to avoid my brother and me playing the computer deucedly, we just can use it on the weekend. 此句與主題句是否有關聯，是否累贅?
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